So Many Paragraphs, So Many Skills

While listening to the many theme paragraphs in English class, I noticed some reoccurring issues that I, too, struggle with in writing. In order to write a solid paragraph, one must have given the topic much thought. A key element in good writing is patience. Something might not turn out the way you want it the first time through. Being able to try again and rework it can make a huge difference. Another important part is including only quotes and commentary that supports the thesis. Straying from the topic is distracting to the reader and doesn't support the point you are trying to make. Wandering commentary is also an easy mistake to make. You can get so caught up in describing the story that you roam to another element of the book. Strong transitions also attribute to a well written 5 part paragraph. They help the writing flow together and easy for the reader to know when a new point is being introduced. These elements all contribute to a well written 5 part paragraph.
Yes, I also need help with my 5 part paragraphs. My main errors were plot summary and quote embedding. Sometimes I was so focused on explaining the quote that I went overboard and summarized a whole scene from the novel. I also needed to explain the background of my quotes. I needed to say what was happening at that point and who was speaking. This was where I would go off track and explain a little too much. I also needed transitions and my concluding sentence could have been phrased better. These are definitely things I will be sure to catch next time.